Kia ora Latayah, Thanks for sharing your pepeha, the one you wrote out and the one you made on the website.
In your writing you are starting to use the senses. My favourite was when you said 'squirt in your mouth' and when you described your holiday. I've never been to Rarotonga but I would love to go - you gave me a picture in my mind that sounds so fun and relaxing. Ka kite āno au i a koe,
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Kia ora Latayah,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your pepeha, the one you wrote out and the one you made on the website.
In your writing you are starting to use the senses. My favourite was when you said 'squirt in your mouth' and when you described your holiday. I've never been to Rarotonga but I would love to go - you gave me a picture in my mind that sounds so fun and relaxing.
Ka kite āno au i a koe,